Group Critique

Today in the group critique my group suggested that add more details to my memoir, so that readers understand the point I’m trying to get across. We spoke about the different ways in which we could each make our collections better. For instance, one of my colleagues is writing about overpopulation in the world, so we advised him to look for statistics and add it to his argument being that it would help legitimize his paper. I feel that these group critiques have helped all of us both educationally and socially. We’ve been able to interact with each other better than when we started, as well as critique each others work more efficiently.