Group critque

Today we had revised our drafts in our groups. Like always, I found the group critique very useful. Reading the drafts of my peers also gave me ideas for my own writing. One of my group members also wrote a poem and the way his poem was structured helped me see that I wanted to do the opposite. Not because his poem was bad but because he wanted it brief and to the point while I wanted to make mine mysterious and long. I got some ideas from Professor Talbird on how to improve my writing. He highlighted a line in my poem that stood out and asked me to elaborate on it. I think that this will improve my writing.