group critique

Today in my group I was able to get constructive criticism on my writing. One of my classmates edited my paper and what they suggested I include in my paper helped me. For certain parts of my writing, the editor put that I should add in things to make the line better. In one part of my writing I said how I've made memories doing the things I love and the reader said I should maybe include a specific memory. I see that now in my writing I can be more detailed and I can include more elaboration of certain things I say.