Welcome to the blog for Prof. John Talbird's English 102 class. The purpose of this site is two-fold: 1) to continue the conversations we start in class (or to start conversations before we get to class) and 2) to practice our writing, reading, and thinking on a weekly basis in an informal setting.
Friday, April 5, 2019
Group critique
Like every Friday in Class we do Group critiques i gave in my draft of my poem it was a two stanza poem , my partners gave me a positive critique , they also told me i should fix my spelling , maybe change the tittle of my poem to make it more interesting . The poem was inspired by my brother and his kids. This made me write the poem and make a memoir about him a story and how he has been copping with this situation. This memoir is about is he a great father ? Is he together with his baby moms ? Is he in a good situation all these questions are answered and made me think about the world its a rotation grandfather , parents , kids , grandson and then all over again.
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